Beautifully arranged, I can just hear the song flowing out of the image. Of course, that could be because it's blasting on my iPod 24/7. Anyhow, this is magnificent. I present to you the highest of fives.
There's something very striking about the way this is put together, the way the words fall down the page add to the essence of the message on the ultimate futility of our puny existences and inescapable fate.
Well, I know you wrote that you're sorry that what you painted wasn't pro and you'd just started, I think that I'd prefer this simple coloring rather than something overly complicated. Those grays and blacks look like smoke curling up and spitting out, and those hands just add an air to the picture that makes it so amazing. And then there's the way you cut the lyrics out of the song and pasted them on in the unsure, sad, descending way that adds even more emotion to it.
I know you might be thinking "Wow, okay, I didn't plan anything or for it to be this nice; you're overestimating/over-analyzing it." but really, how you put it all out is super cool. Sometimes the stuff we don't mean to turn out amazing turns out to be the best.